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    soba var mi evde sizin? borulu ama, eski olanlardan...
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    bazı hatalar var lütfen düzeltiniz
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    @3 yoksa ben hediye ederim buna.
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    özet geçmek gerekirse; masturbation is good for children.
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    gramer bilgine tüküreyim dıbınagodumun cahili
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    also it earns the ability of thinking 3d objects in children's minds yerine

    also it gives the ability of ...
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    as is known, games are the most important things for children. kısmı yanlış, game is the most important work for children. olacak. lan ciddiysen diğer yanlışlarını da düzeltecem. değilsen gotune ıstaka girsin.
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    origami is very affective because it is perceived as a game more than a work.

    olacak
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    Bi de burdan yak kardes.. Ugrastim bak

    origami makes remarkable contribution to education of children . As it is known, playing games is the most important thing on their aspect. Origami is highly effective, because it is perceived by children as a game more than a hard and boring class. Since origami improves children's intelligence, eye-hand coordination, we highly recommend Origami. It also develops skills for children's mind to a level of visualize 3D objects.

    Duzelttim gene..
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    dedikodu yapmayın lan ipneler
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    sen merak etme kardes, 2 senedir amerika da okuyoruz ;)
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    sutyen baltası "boring class" metinde nerede geçiyor. adam tercüme istiyor paraphrase istemiyor. bu arada @16 since lı kısım neresi lan?
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    origami makes a real contribution to children's education. as it is known, game is the most important issue for children. origami is very effective, because it is perceived as a game more than being a hard lesson . we recommend origami, because as well as it improves children's mind, hand and eye coordination, it also helps children earn the ability of thinking 3d objects.
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    @21 yawşak amerikada okuyon da orijinal metinin son satırı ile senin çevirinin son satırı arasındaki farkı nasıl çıkartıyon.
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    @25 rica.
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    origami contributes much to the education of the infants. as known, the most important thing for them is playing games and since origami is seen as a game, rather than a boring lesson, it will be an effective activity.
    origami is recommended for children as it helps to the development of intelligence, hand and eye coordination. moreover, it enables them to envisage 3d objects and to gain such skills.
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    @23 geri zekalinin tekisin baska bisi demicem. 2'si ebenin ami kadar rapor kompozisyon kalip yaziyorum ben..
    @22 de aynisi olmus bi gibim fark yok. ayrica eye-hand coordination diye kelime var! al kullan yazdik o kadar...
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    @27 anlamiyolar amk kasma
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    @28 ben kelimeleri irdelemedim kuş. dilbilgisine baktım
    ayırca sen rapor yazmaya devam et başka gibime yaramazsın keza!
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    @1 origami'yi niye çevirmedin aq onun türkçesi yannantır.
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